It's one of those rare nights that we're both working on Teacher's Pet fic.



seperis: I want a line so badly where Elizbeth tells Rodney "Atlantis' population is not filled with sexual predators."
seperis: And Rodney's like, They *watch him*.
svmadelyn: ohhh. Rodney can yell, you're all pedophiles!
seperis: And I really want to see John play the piano
seperis: I'm going to kill Pru so much.
svmadelyn: *grins* I'll tell her to write it.
seperis: So. Fucking. *Much*.
svmadelyn: I want it too
seperis: For putting that in my head.
seperis: *hopeful*
seperis: I'll send her another box of chocolate.
seperis: Tell her that.
svmadelyn: *nods*
seperis: *amused at Rodney guarding John's virtue*
svmadelyn: *dies*
svmadelyn: In the darkfic version
svmadelyn: John would say something like
svmadelyn: I know you weren't doing that for me.
svmadelyn: But for you. And I think you should make the wait worth it.
seperis: Rodney should have a disturbing dreams of underage sex.
svmadelyn: Yes. Hop to!
seperis: Now I'm all torn.
seperis: Should they have sex or should Rodney have horrifying yet strangely hot dreams about it?
svmadelyn: both!
svmadelyn: second one segues into the first
svmadelyn: nightmares, they come true!
seperis: *dies*
svmadelyn: you know the words pouring from these fingers are pure genius
seperis: Yes.
seperis: they really are.
svmadelyn: why you gotta be all in denial?
seperis: Especially when he's torn between Slut!Teen!John.
svmadelyn: good. *pats you*
seperis: And Virtuous!Teen!John dreams.
svmadelyn: after some training session
seperis: One trying to crawl inside his skin
seperis: The other whimpering "Please be gentle."
svmadelyn: John's especially beautiful, and everyone's watching
seperis: And he'll like, go to his lab and try to kill himseelf with papercuts.
svmadelyn: and Rodney scares them all off
svmadelyn: then in bed that night, he has The Dream
svmadelyn: and calls in sick to the lab
svmadelyn: and everyone shows up at his door
seperis: *smirks* Which one? Slutty John or Virtuous John?
svmadelyn: 'cause he's never DONE THAT
seperis: *giggles*
svmadelyn: and Rodney's all--man, this is HORRIBLE. but they CARE. and HORRIBLE
svmadelyn: and John comes in all concerned
seperis: So *guilty*.
svmadelyn: and rodney's all, I'm contageous!
svmadelyn: you'll die!
svmadelyn: and John's like: I'll take the risk
svmadelyn: Rodney: *COUGHS A LOT*
svmadelyn: John: You done yet?
svmadelyn: Rodney: I think I hurt my throat. Water, please?
svmadelyn: and I think--hmm. Virtuous John
svmadelyn: next dream, John's all coquettish.
svmadelyn: Mmm. Hell. It's what's for dinner.
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From: [identity profile] deadlychameleon.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:26 am (UTC)
*bites lip* What if, John gets his memories back when he's still physically, like, 18?

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:30 am (UTC)
*ponders*

From: [identity profile] devin-chain.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:26 am (UTC)
Clark was only 15 when you first met him. *poke*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:31 am (UTC)
*facepalm* If I go by canon when it finally revealed clark's actual birthday, Lex gave Clark his first handjob when he ws *fourteen* in my fic.

...kidn of make me twtich. but not too much.

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From: [identity profile] eleveninches.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:26 am (UTC)
you know you want to write rodney taking john's virginity.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:33 am (UTC)
Yet he could have a threesome with some trainees of Teyla's after working out one day. And you know, teh team could walk in and be traumatized for *life*.

It's *tempting*.

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From: [identity profile] ladycat777.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:28 am (UTC)
*loves you both*

*gives you chocolate*

*and porn*

There is nothing wrong (well, okay, in fic) with fifteen year old boys and smexing. Ooooh no :)

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:33 am (UTC)
*smirks* Fic makes *everything* okay.

From: [identity profile] namastenancy.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:35 am (UTC)
Angst, sex, horny teenage John (really, is there any other variety) and tempted, conflicted Rodney.

You know you want to do it.
heheheheheh.....come to the dark side, my dear. You KNOW you want THEM to do it.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:52 am (UTC)
*giggles* I seriously think too much about it.

From: [identity profile] inthekeyofd.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:37 am (UTC)
Okay, when is this next chapter going up?? Please..bribes with chocolate..lots and lots of chocolate. *smile*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:53 am (UTC)
Soonish. Madelyn and I are almost done with the next two stories.
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From: [identity profile] kalpurna.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:38 am (UTC)
I. I really want this. Oh god.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:53 am (UTC)
*worries* Me too. Seriously so.

From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/ Date: 2006-07-31 03:48 am (UTC)
You know, teen!John would be approaching his sexual peak at 18 years old, it could be the other way around where John is propositioning Rodney and Rodney is having to be really really noble and turn him down, only now he's thinking about it... and keeps saying 'you're 18!'

To which smart!John replies 'but if I weren't???'

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:53 am (UTC)
*snortgiggle* He's thinking about it *way too much*.

From: [identity profile] thepouncer.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:50 am (UTC)
What about a regular *and* a darkfic version? LIke, here's the AU where things go horribly, horribly awry? And here's the real story where Rodney protects John's virtue? (Seriously, I'm pondering a Marine corporal who's maybe 19? Male or female as you wish, but this person arrives just as John hits teenaged sexiness and has *no clue* that he was (a) younger just a week ago or (b) the military commander of Atlantis. And John likes him/her because there's no baggage, no weight of history, and they can go on training runs together. And Rodney is going insane.

*cough*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 03:55 am (UTC)
I was actually contemplating that, because there are several things I'd like to do that can't fit in the normal storyline at all.

God, though. Rodney would just--*shakes head*.

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From: [identity profile] icyanahita.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 04:23 am (UTC)
Please can I have some more?
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From: [personal profile] zoerayne Date: 2006-07-31 04:24 am (UTC)
*looks helpful and encouraging*

*waits*
I didn't want to have to do this again, but you leave me no choice but to reintroduce you to adolescent John -- now with dogtags, Jenn. Floppy hair and DOGTAGS.

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(sorry for the double comment -- but I hardly ever get a chance to use my Teacher's Pet icon!) :)

From: [identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 04:48 am (UTC)
I... hate you. Now *I* am going to have skeeery teen!slut!John dreams. Actually, never mind. The hate went somewhere...

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 05:09 am (UTC)
by skeeery you mean *hot*, right? With John all lithe and shirtless and painfully pretty and painfully young? And untouched? And *teasing*?

From: [identity profile] grey-bard.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 04:59 am (UTC)
AU is your friend. AU of an AU even more so. (Cuddles DC Comics Elseworlds canonical AU crack)

From: [identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 05:01 am (UTC)
Ooh, sounds exciting - I can't wait to see what you both come up with !!! I'm not fussed how it goes, but I love the Rodney you've written so far :)
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From: [personal profile] yue_ix Date: 2006-07-31 05:39 am (UTC)
Hadn't you linked physical growth with spiritual acceptance in the last snippet? I do not see why it couldn't start as Teenage!sex and end as youngadult!sex. It's be another conflict to Rodney's omg so wrong and yes please again and wow. Also, the look on everyone's face when they ask John why he grew a more than a stubble in the night or that his shirt is a little tighter.

On another note I was wondering if he's getting back to his original old body or, well, kind of grew anew? Rodney could feel reassured to have the scars back/miss then and pretend not to notice.

Or, you know, if you go with him growing a couple of months into one single day, he could be accumulating several months of sexual frustration and hormones in the span of a week. Imagine how lusty he'd be by then. And embarrassed . I know no one who commented so far believes he'll start feeling the first peeks of it at 17 or 18 only. He may only figure who what to do about it by then though.

From: [identity profile] titc.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 06:38 am (UTC)
OMG I read that series yesterday and you're promising more already? I SO love this version of the characters - BigSoftie!Rodney and ICanKillYouWithTheCute!John & Ronon & Teyla...
I can't wait for more (especially if there's a reasonably happy ending, because I'm a sap ;-)!

From: [identity profile] no-detective.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 06:40 am (UTC)
Oh, you cherry-poppin' mamas, you.

OK, so: this (http://youtube.com/watch?v=pI80_gAfj8g&search=Sommersturm) is not exactly work-safe but it might be, um, helpful in your endeavors. By which I mean, please write this. PLEASE.

From: [identity profile] sinclair-furie.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 10:21 am (UTC)
God, I LOVE YOU FOREVER.
Just so you know.

From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 10:31 am (UTC)
*flails*

By surviving this fic, Rodney will become the Ultimate Sainted Woobie! (Though he may still have some stiff competition from Dean Winchester...)

He may develop a stutter. Or a twitch. Or both.

His eyes will be permanently WIDE open.

Poor Rodney. ::pets him and feeds him chocolate::

John ... hot!teen!John ... will he be all innocent and unknowing of the effect he's having on Rodney? Or will he be hot!teen!sexkitten!John, teasing and seducing?

Inquiring minds want to know. Because knowledge is good!

From: [identity profile] everagaby.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 01:18 pm (UTC)
*pats you* At least you're taking the limo to special hell, right? In my head I can completely see John pinning Rodney to a wall and saying "You made me a Puddlejumper, Rodney," as though it was some sort of promise. And Rodney's all flaily and going "you were EIGHT!" and "grabby hands, grabby hands!" and also, just a little bit, "Dear God, where did you learn how to do that?"

Rodney's completely prepared to go to hell. He's expecting his express ticket to get there once John gets back to normal. He's just not sure if the ticket will come in the form of citrus or lots and lots of bullets.

From: [identity profile] diluvian.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 05:05 pm (UTC)
*How* long have I been cheerleading for this part?

Jeez, now I want *all* the versions, dammit.

Rah! Rah! Rah!

From: [identity profile] sp23.livejournal.com Date: 2006-07-31 06:47 pm (UTC)
seperis: Ronon's like, high five! Two of them! That's my boy!

Because he so would. And Rodney would be screeching and flailing like a drag queen who'd just had all of her Jimmy Choos stolen. :)
As much as I would like to join you at that table, I think Rodney should not have sex with John until he's an adult with all his memories back. Then John can be all impressed with Rodney's self-control, and moral high-ground and all. Slutty!Teen!John should have hot sweaty sex with someone closer to his apparent age, to get it out of his system and drive the parental units crazy. Rodney can then mock him for it later, bringing it up every time they have a fight. Like Chaya.

From: [identity profile] toft-froggy.livejournal.com Date: 2006-08-02 10:29 pm (UTC)
OHhh. Wrong but so GOOD. Oh, god. God.

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