For the what happened next meme, [livejournal.com profile] flaming_muse asked for what happened after Something More. So I--snippeted. But you know, feel free to elaborate to the later incredibly incendiary hot sex that happened *right after*. Or ignore it altogether.

Catch Your Breath

When John steps through the wormhole, everything changes.

Rodney remembers this, remembers those times John would light up like this, rare and precious, stored memories that three years didn't dim, never faded, taken out and touched on the rarest nights, when he'd wander his city and feel its loss like his own.

That restless, endless *anger*, something eternally missing, the discoveries that he couldn't share, the worlds that he couldn't see, the universe he'd touched and lost. The city hums around him and he's waking up with it, the buzz of adrenaline and hope and sheer, unrelenting *relief*.

This is Atlantis, Rodney thinks, watching John in the middle of the mess, civilian uniform as a civilian contractor, surrounded by scientists and military alike, Elizabeth and Teyla and Ronon, old friends, acquaintances, survivors who never forgot him, would never have him go, won't ever let him go again. It's like discovery all over again, fresh and shocky, like being high, too bright and too intense, like waking up on Saturday, but better, because John's all the Saturdays in the world rolled into one.

Like they've all been waiting, grieving for what they missed, now rejoicing in its return.

When John looks at him, sun bright and alive like no one Rodney's ever met, Rodney forgets to breathe.

"What?" John says, the dying Atlantean sun behind him like an orange-red halo, too desperately, ridiculously romantic for words to describe.

Before Rodney reaches for him, pulls him into a kiss that silences the room, touches him like they're alone, he realizes.

This is how you fall in love.
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From: [identity profile] pollitt.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:09 am (UTC)
I'm glad Rodney's got his breath, because mine's gone and I can can do is *sigh* with contentment.

That was absolutely beautiful.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:16 am (UTC)
*Grins* Thank you. It's--happy. This is what the buzz of post-tooth-extraction narcotics do to me.

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From: [identity profile] kickthebeat.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:12 am (UTC)
man, I bet the return-to-Atlantis sex would be fiery hot like the sun. you are the best.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:16 am (UTC)
God, it probably lasted a couple of *days*. Altantis would randomly short out the radios so they couldn't be disturbed. *G*

From: [identity profile] fatuorum.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:12 am (UTC)
Oh, wow. *happy sighs*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:17 am (UTC)
Thanks, sweetie. *hugs*

From: [identity profile] kalikahuntress.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:21 am (UTC)
Amazing and really beautiful, i feel like im in Atlantis witnessing Atlantis welcoming back John:)

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:23 am (UTC)
Thank you! *hugs*

From: [identity profile] namastenancy.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:21 am (UTC)
Oh God. Deep heartfelt sigh. This is a beautiful epilogue to one of my favorite SGA stories ever. You break my heart in a good way.

namaste!

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:24 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm just feeling so desperately sappy it's sad. Like, John reciting *poetry* to Rodney (who would melt inside but totally mock it on the outside). *shakes head*

From: [identity profile] snoopygirll.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:25 am (UTC)
Then what happened? *heh* Perfect ending to a perfect story - which sounds like a throw-away line but I really enjoyed 'Something More'. :)

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:33 am (UTC)
Thank you. *Hugs*

And you konw, feel free to create your own porn after that. Cause they had a *lot* of sex.

From: [identity profile] anitac588.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 06:39 am (UTC)
Thank you. Today might actually turn out OK.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:03 am (UTC)
Aww, chica. *hugs*

From: [identity profile] turtlespeaks.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:06 am (UTC)
*has melted into a happy, happy goo*

This is so sweet, and a wonderful continuation to Something More. I loved it!

*is still a happy, happy goo*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:59 am (UTC)
I was *definitely* going for the sap.

Thanks!

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miella: scarf end against sunset (gentle)

From: [personal profile] miella Date: 2005-11-09 07:14 am (UTC)
*sigh*

Yeah. Like that.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:00 am (UTC)
*grins* Cool

From: [identity profile] luthien.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:21 am (UTC)
Yeah, this was pretty much just what I was thinking of. *g* Thanks!

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:01 am (UTC)
*grins* Thank you!

From: [identity profile] lainy122.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:36 am (UTC)
*hearts you so much*

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:01 am (UTC)
Thanks!

From: [identity profile] monkeypumpkin.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 07:52 am (UTC)
This is how you fall in love.

Perfect.

From: [identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:01 am (UTC)
Aww, thanks!

From: [identity profile] theantimodel.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:13 am (UTC)
Omg, Something More was gorgeous and intense and so, so lush with atmosphere. I loved the way it ended but seeing this little glimpse of John being back home is just perfect. I love the image of Atlantis recognizing John and everything just being right again. Thank you.

From: [identity profile] chaps1870.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:34 am (UTC)
That was a very nice addition. Did you say incendiary sex? I was sure I heard that. I don't have a good imagination, could you describe that for me...In detail, please! ;)
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From: [personal profile] fenris_wolf0 Date: 2005-11-09 08:37 am (UTC)
Far too short, but great nevertheless!

Thanks for sharing.

:)

From: [identity profile] bluebrocade.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:48 am (UTC)
Yay! ::sigh::

From: [identity profile] ship-recs.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 08:51 am (UTC)
That's beautiful.

From: [identity profile] out-there.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 09:00 am (UTC)
John's all the Saturdays in the world rolled into one.

*happy sigh*

Oh. That's... so utterly, unbelievably precious. Thank you.

From: [identity profile] kitkat3979.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 09:15 am (UTC)
That's really gorgeous. Thanks for giving us an insight into what happened next.
akacat: John Sheppard of Stargate Atlantis. (SGA Sheppard)

From: [personal profile] akacat Date: 2005-11-09 11:24 am (UTC)
omg that is so- *flails arms in a complete lack of perfect words to say how perfect this is*

*loves*

...

From: [identity profile] everagaby.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 11:36 am (UTC)
Yeah, I think I just woke my neighbor with the squee. Or possibly the subsequent squeebounce. Ah, the squeebounce- a deadly combination.

Yes, we must have you on post-dental surgery drugs more often. I shall personally stock a warehouse. Plus it'll give me a chance to terrorize all the dentists in my area, which may just fall under the category of "Charmic Payback, you Sadistic Fuckers."

Oh, and when I get back to the States in a month? Catching up on SGA like whoa and then possibly snurching the aforementioned idea of the Atlantis betting laptop. I feel the urge to have Zelenka carefully guarding it with random Atlantean safety measures to ensure all bets are safely stored and not tampered with. For some reason my sleep deprived brain is conjuring up the image of him using some sort of Atlantean fly swatter to smack Kavanaugh's hands whenever they get within a foot radius of the Sacred Laptop of Betting-Goodness.

From: [identity profile] 2naonh3-cl2.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 12:04 pm (UTC)
so good!

From: [identity profile] janet-carter.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 01:02 pm (UTC)
OK, I'm both cooing and sighing - that was so nice!

From: [identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 02:20 pm (UTC)
*squeak* I think you broke me. aw.

From: [identity profile] porntestpilot.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 02:24 pm (UTC)
No, seriously though, I'm sitting here staring at the end like a moron. God, this is so so gorgeous and perfect.

From: [identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 02:46 pm (UTC)
Yes.

I keep wondering if John will come back as a US citizen, or as the spouse of a Canadian.

From: [identity profile] emrinalexander.livejournal.com Date: 2005-11-09 03:12 pm (UTC)
I vote for "spouse of Canadian" *G*.
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