Saturday, October 2nd, 2004 06:20 pm
...editing in progress
Finished one third of The Yard, part I, in first line edit using
rivkat's beta. Exactly thirty-three pages. Lost one thousand words in translation. My head hurts. I keep forgetting grammatical forms and my God, do I slip into present tense at random intervals. I removed more 'vaguely's' than I knew existed in this continuum. It's still reading damn slow.
But. One third! Whee! And cheese, spinach, and artichoke dip! Could life get any better than this?
You know, brownies would make it better. At fifty, I shall celebrate and make brownies.
But. One third! Whee! And cheese, spinach, and artichoke dip! Could life get any better than this?
You know, brownies would make it better. At fifty, I shall celebrate and make brownies.
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From:1. Celebrates you working on The Yard, not celebrating your food, though food is nice sometimes.
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From:*bounces*
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From:Brownies transmit over e-mail, right?
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From:But no. Not *yet*.
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From:I miss talking to you on AIM. *huggles you*
-Silverkyst
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From:Also, mmmmmbrownies.
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From:*grins*
Brownies, however, are inspiring as hell. I have noticed this before.
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From:I can't wait to read it!!!!
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