Okay, I feel crappy, so I like to even out the universe. Per usual, long recs, or, Jenn's Number System of Utter Love For a Fic.

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Checkmate'verse by [livejournal.com profile] beadattitude

There is nothing about this story that I don't utterly love, from the transformation, to John's coping, to everyone else's coping, to Rodney the cat-person and John-person.



1.) John. He's--even as a cat, he's John, and I can't even describe how perfectly in character the cat is. It's so cracked it goes beyond crack and comes out on the other side. He communicates with his body more than words, he's reserved and quiet and this presence that fills every page even when he's not there. He's idiosyncric and irritable and indulging all those parts of himself the man's never allowed himself. He's neurotic, in a positive way of embracing it. I love how the change allows him more openness with people--requires it just to get what he needs. I think honestly I made the first dolphin-noise squeeing the first time he lets himself be petted; I literally had to stop and take a moment to do this little victory dance. I love how he interacts with everyone, from team to subordinates, how he alters his method but not his intent. He's still John Sheppard, being a good leader and a good friend. He's just learning new ways to do it, and some of them might even transfer over to being human again. That's good stuff.

Related, interesting note on touch; John's never been very touchy-feely with anyone outside his team. If I kept track, Rodney's gotten the bulk of casual touch from him, and he gets most of his from Rodney. That he'd be most comfortable learning about his newer--tactile requirements? Instincts?--with Rodney makes perfect sense, with someone who knows perfectly he's trusted with touch for a reason, knowing how to give John exactly what he needs in the least threatening way possible.

2.) Rodney. I can't even get *over* Rodney's awesomeness and competence and flailing that he's dealing with his best friend (and maybe crush) in the body of his favorite animal on earth. It's like peanut butter and chocolate! Two great things together! His shock and flailing (no one on earth does flailing like Rodney--it's an art form), fierce protectiveness, friendship, his sheer competence with John, able to still see his friend in a deeply pettable body. Er. Cat body that is. It's fantastic to see him off-balance when John throws him for a loop, hysterical to see him work to find the answers he needs, making a huge effort to learn the person living in the cat the way he couldn't quite do while John was human.

3.) Randomly, as preslash, it's possibly the most interesting courtship in history, though I'm not sure either of them really know that's what they're doing. They nailed meals and entertainment, cohabitation, getting to know each other without the normal ways of commmunication. John can't prevaricate with this body like he can with the other; Rodney is *motivated* to work on interpreting what John wants and needs, like he might not have thought he could with John in human form. As pre-ship, it's--actually pretty amazing how much territory they cover. They're dating. In a non-bestiality way. Basically, all they have left is marriage and sex--they're doing everything else a couple does. And well, talk about Dr. Who and more Batman. They can do that on the honeymoon. During sex.

4.) Teyla and Ronon (or Teamness) - I love them here. Teyla's care, letting John set the parameters of their relationship, working toward being comfortable with each other in their new forms, showing his feelings in action. Very John Sheppard; he's never needed words with his team anyway. They're *cute*, and I have these visions of John stretched across Teyla's lap dozing on movie night while she tries very hard to pay attention to the movie and not indulge in a orgy of petting every chance she gets. They're still them. Ronon was just as fun--his discomfort at first, not sure what to do or how to do it, uncomfortable with John because of their friendship, not sure of the limits. And John taking it into his hands paws to get them back on track. I cannot. Describe. The. Glee.

5.) John doing math as a cat never stops being the most awesome thing in history. I'm just saying.

6.) Carson and Elizabeth's faux pas never stop being funny. Irritating, and very them, and very cute, both in their worry over John and their contrition.

7.) I never stop squeeing for the cat toys. That's so many kinds of awesome right there I have no words.

8.) Any moment that John's getting his belly stroked. No words.


I'm looking forward to the end of this so much. It's just that awesome.

Other longer recs of fic are under the long recs tag. I think I have most of them under there now, but still hunting them.
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From: [personal profile] trobadora Date: 2007-07-17 07:33 pm (UTC)
5.) John doing math as a cat never stops being the most awesome thing in history. I'm just saying.

I completely agree on that. :-) Math!kitty!Shep is BEYOND AWESOME.

From: [identity profile] thepouncer.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-17 08:01 pm (UTC)
Oh god, YES. I've been bad about feedback because my time on LJ has been flaky lately, but I always jump in glee when I see a new part's been posted. All the stuff you said, and also: Heightmeyer. The one where John led a recently arrived Marine to her? Was one of the best things ever.

Plus, math!kitty. And belly-stroking. And Rodney knowing just how to handle John's cat nature and instincts.

Awesomeness incarnate.

From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-17 08:03 pm (UTC)
Beadattitude and this story has totally turned me into a cat person. I want a kitty!

From: [identity profile] khyrra.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-17 08:32 pm (UTC)
YES. TO EVERYTHING YOU SAID.

I have a black cat with green eyes, and now I think of this 'verse every time I pet her(yes, it doesn't matter that she's female.

From: [identity profile] ghfan-98.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 01:55 am (UTC)
I always up for a new addiction. Is the posting date the correct order to read them in?

From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 04:28 am (UTC)
The individual installments skip around and the series in still in progress, even though she's already written/posted some of the later events and is still planning some of the earlier ones. But, generally, the posting order works as a reading order because each individual installment has its own themes/points/whatever.

Also, I think she posted a chronology/timeline at one point - if she did, it's on her journal. I think I remember reading one, anyway....

From: [identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 04:23 am (UTC)
Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes. This is the ultimate cat-fic, isn't it?

The only thing I can think of that you didn't mention was Kate Heit-whatever being kinda awesome. She's one of those characters that canon doesn't treat well (kinda like Elizabeth and Carson, actually) but her cat toy therapy ("jingleballs wheeee!" quote thanks to old fav pet store Christmas commercial) was, well, awesome.

From: [identity profile] lomedet.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 04:41 am (UTC)
oooh...reading all the things you loved about this series makes me want to go re-read it. NOW. It's just such glorious fun!

thank you for the reminder. :-)

From: [identity profile] jade-dragoness.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 04:18 pm (UTC)
Pretty much all the above in agreement is why I'm stalking this series and getting so excited when there's a new part to it. *bliss*

From: [identity profile] anashi.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-18 11:31 pm (UTC)
I think I had a full body grin after reading these stories. I love the stories this fandom produces. :D

From: [identity profile] girlnamedpixley.livejournal.com Date: 2007-07-19 12:54 am (UTC)
John with the cat toys is my favorite. thing. ever. I found the Checkmate 'verse through you a couple months ago and I check obsessively for updates now. *g* But yes! Cat toys! Gah! And the belly berries was particularly adorable, the way John got all freaked out and Rodney actually *laughed* and was contrite and John was huffy and indignant...but then laid back down and let him do it again. LOL! So much love for that universe. It's my happy place too!

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