ext_1210 ([identity profile] parallactic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2004-03-27 01:51 pm (UTC)

The way you guys used words and the imagery sucked me in, and I felt for Ethan. But I agree with another commenter in that the shift to omniscient POV at the end when the rest of the fic was written in 3rd POV limitted was jarring. It felt like it belonged in another fic.
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