okay, first, i have to say i made quite the strangled noise when i noticed this entry. and then after checking to make sure the date on this entry was definitely correct, that noise just went on to another level entirely. because you -- writing adam/kris again.

i actually really liked the style. i thought it fit the story and the atmosphere really well. i admit i was a bit huh when i started reading, but as i kept on with it, i had a couple of my own adam moments of being "oh. oh." and things just naturally fell into place and everything i had read before clicked. another thing i really liked was escalating terror and desperation that was felt as the reality kept changing and settling. beautiful, beautiful stuff to read.

kris replying with "who do you want me to be?" -- that was... a+++ kris. and thank god adam understood because i don't know what i would've done if he hadn't. then the was the last line of the story? ahh, it was perfect.