ext_2930 ([identity profile] dragojustine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2010-09-02 04:48 pm (UTC)

This is horrifying and stunning and vivid. Wow.

You do such a good job... *vague hands* You did such a good job making me complicit, as reader. I was so very caught by the protectiveness of the very first section before I knew anything yet, and then reading so carefully trying to figure out what was going on, and then so caught up on the OMG HOT of it, that the horrifying never quite hit me the way it should. Really amazing POV. Wow.

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