ext_107526 ([identity profile] penrith1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2010-09-02 07:33 am (UTC)

That was incredible. So mysterious until suddenly I got it. Then wow - such jangled, jumbled feelings. Adam drawing Kris back to bring him back to life but at what cost. Kris wanting to die rather than be a blood sucker. I wanted Adam to succeed and seduce Kris even against Kris' own wishes. Oh and the sex was mind blowing. I loved how Adam could feel his need, his thoughts. Gulp - too perfect.

You write a powerful mind fuck - seriously great. Thank you.

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