Wow. All hail your id. You should let it loose more often.

I love how you said outright pretty much nothing, but the back story and enough details came through beautifully anyway.

and this time, he can do so much more with Kris' wide-open mind, easing away the shame and self-hate for needing this, leaving just the happiness and satisfaction and gratitude, pleasure in how much he pleases Adam and how much Kris wants to please him and how much Kris loves this and needs it and craves it.

This was probably my favourite line, it's so darn creepy and intense and yet, loving.