http://jainamac.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jainamac.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2010-05-12 09:55 am (UTC)

You are my favorite author in this fandom. No exaggeration. This was so well done. It's totally not PWP AT ALL (usually the best kinds of porn aren't). There's so much going on here, and I completely appreciate the subtlety in the way you write, there are no anvils dropping from the sky, you never really say anything outright. Their dynamic works so well and it's D/s without being squicky and implausible. There's also the hints that this is a little new to Adam too which is why having Brad there is GENIUS b/c it adds a whole new dimension to what Adam and Kris are doing and to what Brad and Adam did/didn't do. There's a whole other story in here if you read between the lines and I LOVE that. /English major

Plus, the sex was ridiculously UNF-worthy and ever since I started reading Remus/Sirius I've had a collar kink like *whoa* haha. That mental image of Kris in the kitchen...just.. *shivers*...Kris is the only person I've ever seen that can make me have simultaneous reactions of "Aww, I want to squish and cuddle him" and "JFC take me now" I still don't know how that's possible.

Sorry to get all tl;dr on you but I loved this a lot and it's fic like this that makes me feel justified when I defend fan fiction irl. This is totally going in the memories :)

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