I appreciate the humor and the hot sex, very much. But more than that, I love that you really caught the d/s ~emotional vibe, as well-it's not just about who tops/who bottoms, or wearing leather, etc. It's about ~caring for your sub, making sure he's happy, healthy, sated...and your sub is obedient and loving, because he trusts you, completely, and puts himself in your hands without question.

I do sure hope you write more along this vein. ;D