ext_21868: (stalkerkitty)
ext_21868 ([identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2010-02-14 08:28 am (UTC)

I just read all eight parts and I'm about read them again! I love this! I'm just commenting on the whole thing here instead of going back to the different chapters. I think my favorite part so far (except for the oh so excellent kissing parts) is the whole "bad touch" section. That was so well done! Poor Kris! and poor Adam for having to do that, but he did a great job of it. I love the evolution of their relationship, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. :)

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