ext_1096 ([identity profile] mercurydraconix.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2009-09-11 05:19 am (UTC)

This is incredible. As always. Because Fraser is, in fact, bug fuck crazy except the show always plays it for laughs. (And I love Fraser Sr. but Ben is totally crazy.) And in this version, they're all just a little (or a lot) broken, or maybe just a little more broken than the show, and we know Vecchio can be ruthless but this is pretty fucking ruthless right there. And of course Fraser knows. Fraser always knows. The only one who could deceive him was Victoria, and that was really more of a ... deliberate refusal to believe on his part.

I love this a lot. One teeeeeny quibble - unless I was reading the timeline wrong, doesn't that sex scene happen when Ray's all broken-kneed? And then you have Fraser fucking him on his knees, and later Ray kneeling to give a blowjob. Maybe his knee is less screwed up than implied? Because that seems like it might be slightly more masochistic than Ray appears so far.

OR MAYBE THERE ARE SPECIAL PADS, IDK. FRASER WOULD HAVE SPECIAL PADS ON HAND. HE IS NINJA LIKE THAT.

Also also, you have of course read the seminal Bank!Robbing!Fraser story, right? By which I mean, Chicago's Most Wanted (http://www.trickster.org/speranza/CMWanted.html). And if by some bizarro world chance you have not read that you should get on that stat.

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