As a long time Star Trek fan, I loved the reboot. Your story is just the ticket to keeping their flame alive.

I love how you have interjected very Spockian words "unlikely, irrelevent" into just everyday sentences. And, the best line was Pike's "Have it your own way, Mr. Spock. I, for one, look forward to seeing what shape you and young Captain Kirk plan to leave the galaxy in when you're done."

I must admit I so enjoyed the young Spock who in his own way is just as bat-shit crazy as Kirk. Off to read more (and I hope you don't mind I friended you.)