Thank God this one had an ending, because if you had stopped writing when they were trapped in Limbo, I would have freaked out.

I guess I can see why you're still calling this a WIP, but I thought it was an absolutely fascinating theological premise, and a very compelling story, just as it was. I thought the villain was *amazingly* creepy--especially at the beginning when he was just erasing people and then at the very end when it became clear many of the poor souls had been trapped in their rotting bodies for centuries. *Shudders*

And I love that it's Dean's jealousy that keeps the spark of himself alive in limbo, and that the three of them decide to build a house because making something real in that place of ultimate fakeness was most important, and how Janet challenged the false god and fell.

Janet, btw, was a *rocking* OC. I especially loved that Dean could talk to her about things he'd never been able to talk to other people about, and I loved that she knew the Campbells. And the idea of hunting families going back practically to Adam and Eve is a very cool one.