ext_3250 ([identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2008-02-17 11:46 pm (UTC)

Re: I LOVE THAT STORY

::squees with you:: GOD, I love that fic. And my favorite part? Is in chapter five (yes, I know the chapter; it's the part I reread the most), with the training collar and John goes APESHIT and rearranges Bates's face, and then Rodney chokes Bates with the collar, and John busts him back a rank and somewhere in there there is a part where John "casually backhands" Bates so he slides to the end of the collar. And during all of it, from when John is watching with slowly increasing anger all the way to Marines dragging Bates to the bridge, I am squeeing. Go Top!John go!!

OH HELL YES. And John is all TOPPY ENERGY and wanting to claim Rodney and I am riding along like "YES CLAIM HIM" because that sex would be *epic*. There was a *fight* over a *sub* and that's *instinct* and I just--just--flailed.

...can you *imagine* John's reaction when Kolya cut up Rodney, which she was totally going to write, I have to believe that? BLACKOUT RAGE and oh the sex, the epic lifebonding dominant sex, want want want.

*curls up* Want.

Oh, and when John got all freaked out when Rodney was under that shield and after, totally zoned out? *breathless* Just. No words.

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