It's my favorite thing when you build stories in your journal and we all get to see them grow and twist and come together.
I like that were getting some of the backstory/ set-up for the Kryptonian occupation. Your premise is so weird and cool and could easily come across as OOC and tenuous, but I love the separate ways Clark and Lex are coping in a crisis situation. And there's enough detail spread through out the text about the AU itself that everything seems clear and viable. Oh, and thank you so much for not doing a huge info dump to cover resistance/ Kryptonians/ Kal v. Lex situation. Thank you thank you thank you.
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I like that were getting some of the backstory/ set-up for the Kryptonian occupation. Your premise is so weird and cool and could easily come across as OOC and tenuous, but I love the separate ways Clark and Lex are coping in a crisis situation. And there's enough detail spread through out the text about the AU itself that everything seems clear and viable. Oh, and thank you so much for not doing a huge info dump to cover resistance/ Kryptonians/ Kal v. Lex situation. Thank you thank you thank you.
And I thought it was wonderful, by the way.