Oh, man. I knew I should have waited till there was more before I read this! *cries*

Now I am just aching, ACHING to find out what happens next.

Your writing is always like that for me. Somehow you manage to put tension into the smallest acts, the most ordinary situations. It just becomes more and more compelling with dire situations like this one. It's impossible not to be utterly swept up in your stories.

Man, ouch. I cannot wait till another chapter is ready!