Zelenka . . . a sociopathic elf?!? I'm still chortling over my cup of hot chocolate. I don't know which delighted me more - picturing Radek as an elf, or picturing McKay as satan himself.

This is a fantastic story! You got a great way with words. John's voice is very in-character, I love the easy-flowing humour. I pity him, too. I almost pity those doomed military chaps, too. Almost *g*.

Great job. Really, really great job.