ext_9264 ([identity profile] murron.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2005-08-07 07:26 pm (UTC)

Zelenka . . . a sociopathic elf?!? I'm still chortling over my cup of hot chocolate. I don't know which delighted me more - picturing Radek as an elf, or picturing McKay as satan himself.

This is a fantastic story! You got a great way with words. John's voice is very in-character, I love the easy-flowing humour. I pity him, too. I almost pity those doomed military chaps, too. Almost *g*.

Great job. Really, really great job.

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