ext_158552 ([identity profile] reboot-wlm.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seperis 2004-01-12 09:58 am (UTC)

Ethan stares at the chilling cup of coffee and doesn't turn around again.

Damn too bad he didn't turn around and turn into a pillar of salt. Oh well, maybe in the next chapter.

What I found most interesting was Justin's assessment of his relationship with Ethan:

It wasn't Ethan, it was me. How the hell do you deal with the person you used to be with him when you don't ever want to remember? He still loves me and I don't love him and it scares me that maybe I never did. I don't know what to do.

There is just something so satisfying about believing that Justin never really loved Ethan. So glad you didn't have Justin having regrets and fucking Ethan for old times' sake or something equally repulsive. Good beginning...more?

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