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seperis ([personal profile] seperis) wrote2010-06-29 10:53 pm

books: shalador's lady redux

This is random, but I was re-reading Shalador's Lady by Anne Bishop--and tried to decide if there was a colonial aspect to Cassidy going to Dena Nehele, and I have thought on this but most of them are mixed on the race issue, since from my first reading I assumed that the long lived races, or at least most of them, weren't white*, whereas the short lived races very much are, and nothing I've read since has contradicted that--okay, I went off topic, but people who read this, or hey, want to go read the series real fast? You can do that. I can wait for an answer.



What the hell happened to Falonar?

Anne Bishop is not exactly subtle with her anvils, nor does she have characters change type. Cassandra, Luthvian, Theran, even Jaenelle's birth family, the few other vaguely hostile characters weren't bad. I mean, you knew who the bad people were. They were the ones castrating people and raping people. Or they were like Roxy, Kernilla et al who probably would end up like that eventually but weren't there yet.

...I need to get off this italics kick soon. But that's one of the things that get across fairly fast. You don't have to worry about liking the wrong character. You really could not like the bad characters. Even with a lot of effort.

Falonar as introduced in The Queen of the Darkness was not a bad guy and became Surreal's lover. By Dreams Made Flesh, the third story in there (I think?), they'd broken up because he was interested in Nurian the healer, and there were bruised feelings.

I re-read to see if I missed something, but people, I've almost memorized these books, okay? I did not see the transition there. Did something happen in Tangled Web that by some insane chance I missed?



Okay, now just regular squee.



One thing Anne Bishop does really well is make sure there's always something interesting happening, and it's not always Territory changing things, but especially in the Cassidy novels, the normal day to day routines of a court and its queen. In my earlier review, I talked about how much I loved that all these people are not superpowered, and why that works here, works brilliantly, and why I think Dena Nehele/Shalador Nehele needed a less powerful queen.

After re-reading, I'm even more convinced that a powerful queen or a lot of dark jeweled anybodies would have been disastrous for the people living there. Even now, Jaenelle and most of her (former) First Circle are superpowered in Territories that in general need that because they have a lot of dark jeweled people in them. They need the power to be equal to or greater than the people they rule, and their Territories are built around the fact of a lot of people being opal or above. Their lives are built around it, in fact.

Throwing Jaenelle to Dena Nehele would be the equivalent of moving, say, the population of fifteenth century London into current time New York. Not only are the people completely unable to figure out how to catch up with five hundred years of change, they don't have the context to understand it and they'd have no idea how to do anything or have the tools, either by education or by simply growing up there, to fit into current time New York.

With less power, Cassidy has to lead by both doing and by showing and by teaching others to do what she can't. She literally can't do everything for them, whereas it would be hard for Jaenelle not to and if she didn't, it would breed resentment from the people she ruled.

Whereas Cassidy's court, the distribution of labor also assures that everyone has a job to do, a necessary job, that they'll pass to other courts and other queens.

(This is where I stumbled on my colonialism thoughts and tried to decide if Cassidy coming to Dena Nehele could be considered a type of colonialism, and I think yes, but without disempowering the people who live there (I'm not sure how much difference it makes that she was invited by a member of the Territory, or that the people of Dena Nehele had once lived by Blood rules and wanted to return to that; again, this social structure really--complicated). To me--and I am willing to be corrected on this one if I'm off base on interpretation--she's less there to save them, or bring the enlightenment of Blood society to the savages as be a living, breathing toolbox for them to use to build their Territory. There's also the fact that the actual work to get the Territory functional again, the ways they go about rebuilding first the village and then the provinces are carried out exclusively by the native population.

This is the kind of thing I come up with at two in the morning, okay? Just go with it. A lot of it came from the fact that the Kaeleer queens aren't permitted to intervene in any way, and interestingly, the only time Kaeleer intervenes is indirect and at specific request of people who live in the Territory.)

The Blood

You know, the more I read about the Blood, the more I wonder about their social structure literally being genetic.

Caste isn't imposed by society but by literal what you can do from birth (exception; black widows, which someone can be either born or trained into, which makes me wonder how non-born black widows get that snakes' tooth thing. Is there a ceremony? How does that work?). It's fluid in that the leadership comes from any social class and any jewel level as related to caste; a Queen can be born white jeweled into a tanner's family and still has the biological imperative and equal opportunity to rule, and social class is completely irrelevant to that. That doesn't mean there isn't classism--oh, there is and it's covered in here as well--but Anne Bishop, as pointed out above, isn't ambiguous. In general, people who give a shit about social class are like, evil or in the ambiguous good category.

The entire caste of Warlord Princes is another thing entirely that I'm not entirely sure I know how to interpret; with a literal genetic imperative to serve (men who do not feel this are unnatural and weird and, you know, evil), who have the equivalent of a bond-at-first-sight with the Queen they are supposed to serve that is entirely separate from their sexual relationships or marriages or friendships, and who are violent and irrational by nature and if they wear dark jewels, can't be and shouldn't be trusted unless they serve a Queen, and go into heat regularly and must have violent sex with someone that can end badly (but if the Warlord Prince is emotionally attached, which it is implied that he should be to a lover, then it's just superhot).

The Blood are supposed to be separate from the Landen by their power, which is true, and their natures, which is also true, but it's in that they are less (as normally defined) human because of it, with genetic and biological hardwiring that's pretty much identical to how animal social structures exist. Or this: the Landens without the Blood could develop a democracy, a monarchy, an oligarchy, a new political/social structure of pretty much any kind they thought up. The Blood are severely limited by their own biology, and any alternate they might want to develop has to take into account their own hardwiring before it even got as far as political philosophy.

Like, IDK, bees that can think? I mean, sure, if we had some self-aware, intelligent bees that could exercise free will, they couldn't just set up like, elections in the hive one day just for the fuck of it; they'd have to accommodate the fact that certain types of bees literally can only do certain things, and--

Wait. Are the Blood bees?




Seriously, are the Blood bees? *blank* That can't be right.

In case you, too, want to know the answer, hey, Anne Bishop's page on Amazon! Yes, I really want everyone in the universe to read these so there are more people to talk to about them. THEY MIGHT BE HUMAN BEES!

Note

* I'm using 'non-white' instead of POC because I'm not sure it's appropriate in the way this fantasy series was introduced and developed, since it is really different in pretty much everything in how their societies are structured and arranged.

If using POC would be more appropriate or if 'non-white' is in any way offensive, please tell me and I'll make the change immediately. I had POC first, but since this fantasy doesn't follow anything even close to the white European medieval fantasy model (or the social structure of pretty much anything I've ever read or heard of in my life), and POC is, at least on LJ, a identification term that also has political/social history and connotations, I didn't want to take the term lightly or misuse its real life meaning in context of a fantasy series.
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[personal profile] tielan 2010-06-30 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
Hi, here via network.

If you find out what the deal is with Falonar, let me know. That kind of came out of left field for me, too.

I wrote it off with the hints from Queen of the Darkness that there was a natural rivalry between Falonar and Lucivar and this was just an extension of the whole "Falonar ended up in the High Priestess of Askavi's First Circle, and Lucivar ended up as a slave" thing. Except turned on its head, because now Lucivar is Master of The Guard in the Dark Court, and the brother of the Warlord Prince of Dhemlan, and the Warlord Prince of Ebon Askavi, and damn that's gotta sting when it's a half-breed slave you figured you had the jump on...

I don't know about the Blood and bees. I'll have to think that one over. There certainly seem to be some very limiting constraints in their caste sitaution (and I'm guessing that 'hearth witch' is more of a character trait and less of a caste, right? Because it's not mentioned in the caste list, but they make a whole heap about Marion being one in the one about how she and Lucivar get together), which may or may not allow for some flexibility.

(Also, Rainier. Tip of the homosexual iceberg in the Black Jewels books. And Karla prefers women? They never did more than touch upon that, and dammit, wasn't she pregnant when she got poisoned in Queen of the Darkness?)

Sorry. I don't usually have people to talk about this with.
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2010-06-30 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
And OMG, I have read all of the books.

The Blood as bees is a really interesting consideration because as you said, so much of their caste is based on biology. *requires further exploration because I know nil about bees, except that they sting and so far, I'm not allergic*

I don't know what happened to Falonar. I felt like that came out of left field or Anne Bishop decided that she didn't want Surreal to have a love interest, so nixed him? It confused me, especially with the implication that Falonar left because Surreal didn't need protecting. But maybe I misread that. It's been a couple of years since I read Dreams Made Flesh.
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[personal profile] concinnity 2010-06-30 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, so I recently started reading this series because you were going on about it a couple of weeks ago. And by recently, I mean I'm like 150 pages into the first book (pleasure reading time is limited). ANYWAY, I was reading it last night and having the *exact same thoughts* okay not exactly the same but whatevs. The worldbuilding that is going on here is like, tied to the spines of the characters, which does a lot for the novels. I thought I was missing something because I was reading it after *coughs* 2 gin & tonics *cough*, but I think you're onto something.

Back to you- a)I think some of the long-lived are described as having darker skin, but not all of them are (er, so far), so I'm curious as to why you would think they all are?

b) the Black Widow thing can happen via ritual as per the first book, and as a sidenote, that thing where Jaenelle milks out Daemon's pent-up and crystallized venom? After getting instructions from his dad? Closer to child porn than most of my reading, I'm just saying. *blinks*

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[personal profile] scy 2010-06-30 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
HMM.

*is thinking*

(Anonymous) 2010-06-30 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, wanted to comment on the colonialism thing. While I agree that it wasn't colonialism I disagree on why. I think it was because Cassidy went alone and was surrounded and pretty much at the mercy of. But I think you're glossing over the fact that Kaleer helped a huge huge amount, in the second book, practically everything that she's able to do for the territory and impresses the others comes directly from Kaleer - i.e. money! Which makes it really kind of unfair IMO - Kaleer is giving/lending this money because they like Cassie and withholding it from everyone else for based on personal feelings - not giving a damn about random Warlord Princes, or Warlords or Hearth Witches.

The other thing that bothered me was how helpless Cassie was in a lot of ways. How insecure. While I think it worked and was good for the people of Dena Nehe I was kind of annoyed that even here were her romantic interest was so damaged and had every reason to fear her the man was still the one doing all of the romantic advances! Ugh. I mean yes it might have been a little creepy to have her hitting on Grey but to have Grey make her nervous, same as Daemon did Jaenelle etc. etc.? I just wish I had a seen a little bit of Cassy taking control and pushing the Warlord Princes instead of being insecure and blowing up mostly ineffectually.

But um, I did love the books.

(Anonymous) 2010-07-01 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
That's absolutely true but it was that entirely personal loan that let Cassidy be seen as a good Queen and attracted others to join her territory and I don't know that actually demonstrates being a good Queen. It just demonstrates having wealthy friends who took an interest.

And I'm not sure she did act as Jaenelle would have but maybe so - the thing is when Jaenelle is mostly passive/protected it is in the context of her having vastly more power than the males pushing her around - that context is different for Cassidy and her court because Cassidy does not have more power she has less. Will her Court really obey her? We don't really know. We know they'll protect her.
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[personal profile] wickedwords 2010-07-01 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
I have a thing (a kink, a bent, a fetish, a preference) for stories where the character is internally strong yet emotionally at sea, and Cassidy did very well by me for that reason. If there's a colonial aspect to it, it's all about the people of Shalador; they are clearly the first peoples of Dena Nehele. So -- to slip into a completely different universe for a moment -- Cassidy is brought in as the new governor of the colony who 'goes native', what with moving to Shalador and all. It really felt like the 1600s Cavalier era to me, rather than the 1800s colonial period. Maybe it was because I could totally see Sarah Plain and Tall -- I mean Cassidy -- decked out in those types of clothes.

(Anonymous) 2010-07-01 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*spoilers*

Her territory splits off from Dena Nehele - and various Warlord Princes all decide to join her territory rather than remain in Dena Nehele. It would have been more meaningful IMO if they had chosen that and were passionate of that purely on the basis of Karmila versus Cassidy or even just on the basis of Cassidy and them being Warlord Princes in need of a good Queen and not partially because of the money and added prosperity Cassidy could provide their lands independent of her own effort.

Er, sure they obey her orders, like ordering Ranon to play his lute. Or ordering that the old repressive laws were no longer in effect. What other orders were you thinking of? I don't remember her ordering them to do anything that they did not want to do or didn't agree to and them doing it. The closest I remember her coming is that incident with the Warlords and laden girl - and she didn't order them to interfere - she threw herself into the fight so that their interference was protection and not obedience.

I definitely felt she was more "acted on" than the "actor". It wasn't her plan to go to the Shalador village - Ranon convinced her while she was hysterical. It wasn't her plan to get the loan (as I remember). It wasn't her plan to have all the Warlord Princes join her. Etc. All the plans she had were frustrated by simple disagreement by Theran. She could have thrown him out of her Court for goodness sakes! Yes there wasn't another male who was "hers" but she could have chosen someone more agreeable at least. She could have ordered Theran to do what she wanted, period. But I don't remember her successfully "insisting" on anything in the books. No conflict resolution skills.

I liked the books and I liked Cassidy occasionally but I think to say that by the end of two books she had a real grip on her court is reading things into the books that weren't there. I don't even know that she got to know the Warlord Princes in her court - we still don't know anything about most of them.
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[personal profile] saekhwa 2010-07-01 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I know that I can't wait that long. March? D:

I guess I should learn to be patient. I guess I can just start over and re-read everything through again. And maybe again after that.

(Anonymous) 2010-07-05 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Hm, I disagree that she couldn't choose another male to replace Theran - out of something like 200 available males in the Territory I'm sure one of them would have been easier to deal with. It would have been difficult and a confrontation because of the whole Grayheaven thing but it was technically possible.

The issue for me is probably that I love the world and the particular set up of Cassidy's story really really hits my buttons - it is perfect - but Cassidy herself is not the character I wanted/hit my buttons in terms of behavior. So I really enjoyed the books because of the situation but was frustrated with Cassidy, though she had her high points. I'm crossing my fingers that there will be another main character Queen in the future - a self confident one would be a nice change IMO! (Jaenelle, Lia, and Cassidy all seemed to me very insecure when it came to interpersonal relationships though they all had good reasons for it). And one that loves clothes would thrill me - I get the occasional feeling that being into and comfortable with dressing up makes me "petty" and "borderline evil" in the Realms.

I really really wish there was more decent fanfic - I don't suppose you've seen any sites (other than fanfiction.com)?

[identity profile] keykook16.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Whatever happened to/with Falonar is going to be addressed in the next Black Jewels story collection, according to the author's website. (I think, I read that weeks ago because I was likewise 'wtf' while reading Shalador's Lady.) My theory is that the ambition that was hinted at during his intro went very bad somewhere between him and Surreal breaking it off and Cassidy's intro.

I agree with your theory about why Cassidy is the perfect queen for the Dena/Shalador Nehele area (if only Theran had taken the hints) and am interested in thoughts on the drawbacks to the otherwise awesome Blood position.
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[identity profile] stripedpetunia.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
I think only the natural Black Widows get the snake tooth; the trained ones just learn how to weave webs and shit. I've read something like the first five of these books, but I'm vaguely curious about the others. They're trashy romancey D/S-bent fantasy books just this side of bodice-ripping (not judging, really, just not my usual taste) but GOD the worldbuilding.

IDK if the Blood really equate to bees (I... I just think of bee-dancing and then I lose it; do the Warlord Princes dance to communicate where the Queens can be found?) but outside of the biological imperatives of caste, I think of it as some kind of feudal thing not unlike Japan pre-Meiji restoration or something.

[identity profile] morvoren.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 06:39 am (UTC)(link)
Oh good, an explanation would be very welcome, because I read Shalador's Lady and went "huh" at it, then re-read all of them together and went "wtf?!".

[identity profile] keykook16.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
I hear you...and since Daemon seems to be the one who, uh, cleared things up - when? Before or after the Vulchera mess? What is the time line of events here?

[identity profile] chancecraz101.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure you can call it colonialism since it was a return to a structure that had existed before everything went to hell in a hand bask. However the parallels between the Shaldonrans = Native Americans wasn't exactly the subtlest thing in the world. On the other hand the "oh this other culture/art/rituals is so much better, let the old ways die" trope you usually see never appeared. In fact the exact opposite happened where the Shaladorans were given access to works of art that had been presumably lost for ever. I find it hard to get a read on that stuff in her books, since she seems to merrily set down upon the old way then half way there dumps everything sideways and says "Ha! Deal with that!"

As for Falonar, there are two things I keep in mind for this. One nothing in these books will ever overshadow the abrupt arrival of Marion for me. I get that she wanted Damian to think Lucivar had gotten the girl so to speak, but to the reader there was no hint of this coming. At the end of Heir to the Shadows you leave Lucivar healing from his past, but still, at best, ambivalent towards women, and completely apathetic towards in sex. We get to Queen of the Darkness, only seven years later, and he's married, w/a kid, to a women we have never meet at any point in these books. And yes she went into the back story later in Dreams Made Flesh. I'm also sure the decision was rooted in practicalities of the rhythm and pacing of the story, and the fact that would easily have added 100 pages to the novel, but at the time it was extremely jarring to me to have that much critical information breezed over like that. After that sudden jump - 180's in her books are seriously not unexpected.

Two, Falonar, could simply have just screwed up. Frankly if Theron had been living in Kaeleer, he'd probably be dead in 6 months. Not because he's evil or bad, just really thick and stupid about certain things. And with the level of violence this society seems to live at, being a social retard seems to be the easiest way into an early grave. It had been mention several times in the trilogy that some of the immigrants just didn't make it because they didn't understand the rules as well as they thought they did. Janelle mention something like 50% (I'm guessing so I could be wrong) of the immigrants that came to Kaeleer died, which is why making service to a Queen became a condition of staying. That is an awfully high attrition rate, and I doubt that all of those people were rapists and murderers.

As for the caste, I think any women can train to be a priestess or a healer. I'm sure some have a natural aptitude for healing, but it didn't seem as if there was any distinctions in scent mentioned for either of those positions, like a Queen or a Black Widow. As for the snake tooth, I think trained ones can acquire it. Satean had one and he sure as hell was not a natural born black widow. So my take is, the only thing that you actually have to born to, as far as women go, is Queen. My question in this falls more to the men side. What the hell is the difference between a Warlord and a Prince? And why are Warlord Princes, and Princes both referred to with the title "Prince"? Doesn't that get confusing?

[identity profile] othercat.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
...I have a vague memory of Falonar doing something stupid in Tangled Webs. However, a lot of characters were doing something stupid in the book, so I could be wrong. (TW is not my favorite book in the series because of the stupid.)

[identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
I've only read the original trilogy, so I'm not up on most of what you're talking about. But my first thought on the colonialism question is that not all effects of colonialism were bad-ending sutee and footbinding, for example, and getting roads and various other infrastructure built. It sounds like a less-powerful queen ruling a lighter-jeweled people would be beneficent colonialism.

I always thought it was interesting, that a queen didn't have to be magically powerful to be a good ruler. It's both a biological response to her own biology that spurs obedience; but also a biological response to her character, as well. A bad queen would get some obedience, but not as much, and not as well, by not-as-good people.


HUMAN BEES, PERFECT! :D
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[identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 09:56 am (UTC)(link)
It's been a long time since I've read the books (and only the original trilogy); but I recall thinking that the women were also born to their positions as Black Widow and Priestess, they just didn't have a defining scent. The scent is part of what makes a Queen a Queen. I thought Saeten having a snake tooth was because he's a powerful enough Warlord Prince that he's like a male Queen (he and Damian both, which is why they need to bond with Witch, not just a Queen). I wasn't exactly reading the books with analysis in mind-there's so much info to absorb to follow the story that it can be hard to keep up, at first!

That attrition rate is awful, indeed. I wonder what their birth rate is like, to make up some numbers-and if the next generation are any smarter or more socially adaptable...Darwinism, done human bee-style.


I don't think it would be confusing to the Blood themselves to call both Princes and Warlord Princes by the same title. They can tell which the men in question are without the titles-it comes across as "sir" to me.

[identity profile] seperis.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Just a quick note, I'll come back to the rest shortly:

So my take is, the only thing that you actually have to born to, as far as women go, is Queen.

No, the books specifically state that caste is inborn and named off the castes as Priestess, Healer, Black Widow, Queen for women. Book Three Luthvian is very specific about her caste being higher than Surreal's since she's a Healer and Black Widow. It's also very specific when they talk about a Black Widow that was *born* a black widow ('natural').

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